Can someone proofread this?


The advantage of having an interactive presentation is that it grabs people attention and keeps them reading. The advantage of having it in an article form is that you can get more information out without taking a long time. The disadvantage of having it in an article form is most people would lose interest in it. It could be helpful to present ideas in more than one medium because different people like different mediums and it could attract more people. I prefer the article form because I find it easier to read and it gives me more information faster. Most of the students liked the interactive presentation, while I chose the article. I think that the interactive form taught me, more than the article forms because I was doing the investigating and not just reading it, by doing it myself, I remember more of it.

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"and keeps them reading" is redundant. When you say you prefer the article form as it gives you more information, but think that the interactive form taught you more, you contradict yourself.