Respuesta :

It is very well written. Try using grammerly to check any grammar errors. I would however include somthing else that you did beacuse all you focused was on school work, but honestly it is funny in a way that all you did was schoolwork. i liked it lol

KeiraDawn
What I've learned through the years is that no matter how much u don't even know what ur saying the fancier the words the higher the grades. Also I like to do a nut graph and then add in the details later ( a nut graph is a little paragraph or so of what happened ) also write for 25 mins and take 5 min breaks.

How I might write ur essay:

The summer of 2018 has been primarily uneventful. Due to the increasing rain I had not had much time to spend at the pool or beach. So instead I focused by studies on upcoming school work that would be due when the school year restarts.

There is a little help :)